Update about:rights legal text.

1 files changed, 12 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/toolkit/locales/en-US/chrome/global/aboutRights.dtd b/toolkit/locales/en-US/chrome/global/aboutRights.dtd
index 319984d41..95c5fa515 100644
--- a/toolkit/locales/en-US/chrome/global/aboutRights.dtd
+++ b/toolkit/locales/en-US/chrome/global/aboutRights.dtd
@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@
 <!ENTITY rights.intro-point1b "Mozilla Public License">
 <!ENTITY rights.intro-point1c ". This means you may use, copy and distribute &brandShortName; to others.  You are also welcome to modify the source code of &brandShortName; as you want to meet your needs. The Mozilla Public License also gives you the right to distribute your modified versions.">
 
-<!ENTITY rights.intro-point2-a "You are not granted any trademark rights or licenses to the trademarks of the Mozilla Foundation or any party, including without limitation the Firefox name or logo. Additional information on trademarks may be found ">
+<!ENTITY rights.intro-point2-a "You are not granted any trademark rights or licenses to the trademarks of Moonchild Productions or any other party, including without limitation the Basilisk and Pale Moon names or logos. Additional information on trademarks may be found ">
 <!ENTITY rights.intro-point2-b "here">
 <!ENTITY rights.intro-point2-c ".">
 
 <!-- point 2.5 text for official branded builds -->
-<!ENTITY rights.intro-point2.5 "Some features in &brandShortName;, such as the Crash Reporter, give you the option to provide feedback to &vendorShortName;. By choosing to submit feedback, you give &vendorShortName; permission to use the feedback to improve its products, to publish the feedback on its websites, and to distribute the feedback.">
+<!ENTITY rights.intro-point2.5 "Some features in &brandShortName; give you the option to provide feedback to the publishers of this software. By choosing to submit feedback, you give the publishers in question permission to use the feedback to improve their products, to publish the feedback on their websites, and to distribute the feedback.">
 
 <!-- point 3 text for official branded builds -->
 <!ENTITY rights2.intro-point3a "How we use your personal information and feedback submitted to &vendorShortName; through &brandShortName; is described in the ">
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 <!ENTITY rights2.webservices-header "&brandFullName; Web-Based Information Services">
 
 <!-- point 5 -->
-<!ENTITY rights.intro-point5 "In order to play back certain types of video content, &brandShortName; downloads certain content decryption modules from third parties.">
+<!ENTITY rights.intro-point5 "In order to play back certain types of video content, &brandShortName; may download certain content decryption modules from third parties, if playback of DRM content is enabled or available.">
 
 <!-- Note that this paragraph references a couple of entities from
      preferences/security.dtd, so that we can refer to text the user sees in
@@ -59,14 +59,18 @@
 <!ENTITY rights3.webservices-c ". Other features and Services can be disabled in the application preferences.">
 
 <!-- safe browsing points for branded builds -->
+<!-- Google SafeBrowsing requires an API key; this should always remain disabled unless
+     an API key is obtained. Official builds do not use SafeBrowsing.
 <!ENTITY rights.safebrowsing-a "SafeBrowsing: ">
 <!ENTITY rights.safebrowsing-b "Disabling the Safe Browsing feature is not recommended as it may result in you going to unsafe sites.  If you wish to disable the feature completely, follow these steps:">
 <!ENTITY rights.safebrowsing-term1 "Open the application preferences">
 <!ENTITY rights.safebrowsing-term2 "Select the Security selection">
 <!ENTITY rights2.safebrowsing-term3 "Uncheck the option to &quot;&enableSafeBrowsing.label;&quot;">
 <!ENTITY rights.safebrowsing-term4 "Safe Browsing is now disabled">
+-->
 
 <!-- location aware browsing points for branded builds -->
+<!-- Official builds use IP-API.com -->
 <!ENTITY rights.locationawarebrowsing-a "Location Aware Browsing: ">
 <!ENTITY rights.locationawarebrowsing-b "is always opt-in.  No location information is ever sent without your permission.  If you wish to disable the feature completely, follow these steps:">
 <!ENTITY rights.locationawarebrowsing-term1a "In the URL bar, type ">
@@ -82,10 +86,10 @@
 <!ENTITY rights.webservices-term1-unbranded "Any applicable service terms for this product should be listed here.">
 
 <!-- points 1-7 text for branded builds -->
-<!ENTITY rights2.webservices-term1 "&vendorShortName; and its contributors, licensors and partners work to provide the most accurate and up-to-date Services.  However, we cannot guarantee that this information is comprehensive and error-free.  For example, the Safe Browsing Service may not identify some risky sites and may identify some safe sites in error and the Location Aware Service all locations returned by our service providers are estimates only and neither we nor our service providers guarantee the accuracy of the locations provided.">
+<!ENTITY rights2.webservices-term1 "&vendorShortName; and its contributors, licensors and partners work to provide the most accurate and up-to-date Services.  However, we cannot guarantee that this information is comprehensive and error-free.  For example, for the Location Aware Service all locations returned by our service provider are estimates only and neither we nor our service provider guarantee the accuracy of the locations provided.">
 <!ENTITY rights.webservices-term2 "&vendorShortName; may discontinue or change the Services at its discretion.">
-<!ENTITY rights2.webservices-term3 "You are welcome to use these Services with the accompanying version of &brandShortName;, and &vendorShortName; grants you its rights to do so.  &vendorShortName; and its licensors reserve all other rights in the Services.  These terms are not intended to limit any rights granted under open source licenses applicable to &brandShortName; and to corresponding source code versions of &brandShortName;.">
-<!ENTITY rights.webservices-term4 "The Services are provided &quot;as-is.&quot;  &vendorShortName;, its contributors, licensors, and distributors, disclaim all warranties, whether express or implied, including without limitation, warranties that the Services are merchantable and fit for your particular purposes.  You bear the entire risk as to selecting the Services for your purposes and as to the quality and performance of the Services. Some jurisdictions do not allow the exclusion or limitation of implied warranties, so this disclaimer may not apply to you.">
-<!ENTITY rights.webservices-term5 "Except as required by law, &vendorShortName;, its contributors, licensors, and distributors will not be liable for any indirect, special, incidental, consequential, punitive, or exemplary damages arising out of or in any way relating to the use of &brandShortName; and the Services.  The collective liability under these terms will not exceed $500 (five hundred dollars). Some jurisdictions do not allow the exclusion or limitation of certain damages, so this exclusion and limitation may not apply to you.">
+<!ENTITY rights2.webservices-term3 "You are welcome to use these Services with the accompanying version of &brandShortName;, and &vendorShortName; grants you its rights to do so.  &vendorShortName; and its licensors reserve all other rights in the Services.  These terms are not intended to limit any rights granted under open source licenses applicable to &brandShortName; and to corresponding source code versions of &brandShortName;, however these (optional) services are provided asa convenience to you, and in no way extend your software rights to the Services.">
+<!ENTITY rights.webservices-term4 "The Services are provided &quot;as-is&quot; and &quot;as-available&quot;. &vendorShortName;, its contributors, licensors and distributors disclaim all warranties, whether express or implied, including without limitation warranties that the Services are merchantable and fit for your particular purposes.  You bear the entire risk as to selecting the Services for your purposes and as to the quality and performance of the Services. If your jurisdiction does not allow disclaiming of warranties, then you should not use &brandShortName; or Services.">
+<!ENTITY rights.webservices-term5 "Except as required by law, &vendorShortName;, its contributors, licensors, and distributors will not be liable for any indirect, special, incidental, consequential, punitive, or exemplary damages arising out of or in any way relating to the use of &brandShortName; and the Services.  The collective liability under these terms will not exceed $500 (five hundred dollars). If your jurisdiction does not allow the exclusion or limitation of damages, then you should not use &brandShortName; or Services.">
 <!ENTITY rights.webservices-term6 "&vendorShortName; may update these terms as necessary from time to time. These terms may not be modified or canceled without &vendorShortName;'s written agreement.">
-<!ENTITY rights.webservices-term7 "These terms are governed by the laws of the state of California, U.S.A., excluding its conflict of law provisions. If any portion of these terms is held to be invalid or unenforceable, the remaining portions will remain in full force and effect. In the event of a conflict between a translated version of these terms and the English language version, the English language version shall control.">
+<!ENTITY rights.webservices-term7 "These terms are governed by the laws of Sweden, excluding any conflict of law provisions. If any portion of these terms is held to be invalid or unenforceable, the remaining portions will remain in full force and effect. In the event of a conflict between a translated version of these terms and the English language version, the English language version shall take precedence.">